Monday, June 14, 2010
Assignment 1.13 Use of Transitions
To begin with, as new people from distant lands enter into the United States, they should learn how to speak and write our English language. In addition, some try to learn the general basics before immigrating into the United States, so they do not feel overwhelmed learning our processes for writing or speaking. In comparison, I have heard that our language is much more difficult to learn when compared to the French language. First, some new comers attend classes to learn English. As the newcomers become accustom to using our language they become comfortable extending their knowledge to members of their own family or friends arriving here for a better life. For example, there are several places and even some colleges offering classes to help people adjust to using English more in their daily life. By contrast, you find the younger people willing to learn the new language compared to their elders. Additionally, our schools have added resources to help the younger children adjust to English so they can communicate with the teacher and their classmates. For instance, in my job I have had to communicate through the younger children in the home to offer care to the adults in the home. This is hard because you have to ask direct questions about their health and daily activities. I hope that as people come into the United States more and more try to learn our language to make communication easier.
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I don't see any other 1.13!! So, I see we did have some grammar issues, but think the transitions were good as well as effective.
ReplyDeleteI agree with sara, there are a few grammar issues but most of the transitions are well done, and there are definitely enough of them :) I think this is a little bit of a tricky subject though. It is frustrating trying to communicate with people who speak a different language, but I'm very hesitant to say they should learn our language. Many people migrate to the U.S under a refugee status, and are not only older but set in their ways. It would make things easier for us if they would conform but...where's the fun in that? :) Diversity is a wonderful thing!!
ReplyDeleteI liked the flow of your transitions. I thought they were very easy to follow and you gave some good examples. I also liked how you were not saying they had to give up their language but only learn some of ours. I think it is beneficial for those of us working 911 when no interpretor is available. If we can't understand anything you are saying, you are not getting the appropriate help you need. Great topic!
ReplyDeleteI really like this paragraph because it's easy to follow, and you definitely have eight transitions. However, I do have one question: did you consider the possibility of having more transitions within sentences, not just at the beginning of sentences?
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